Author: Sever Bronny
Series: The Arinthian Line #1
Augum’s life shatters when the distant Legion proves his town is not too small to conquer. But though he loses much, he gains a power he never suspected. And with that power comes the chance to build a new life for himself, with a teacher, a home, and friends. But the Legion is determined to control or crush those with power, and Augum and his mentor are a powerful draw.
This was good, although it didn’t stand out to me much. There were a few plot twists that I expected, which felt a bit hammered in. Augum’s family is one of the expected ones.
I didn’t care so much for the magic system. I have no problem with the grades of magic and how they’re awarded, but the level of spells is a bit weird, and it is confusing why different elements seem to have the same spells. For example, I can totally buy “create a light” magic existing across multiple elements, manifesting differently per element but still roughly the same. It’s a bit harder to believe lightning magic will execute repair spells, and that repair is such a low-level spell when it can be used for such massive things even by beginners. Also I would have liked to see magic used more outside the standard system, as it’s made clear the standards were developed by a body of mages and don’t seem to be actual limits of the power.
I did mostly like the characters. Augum’s journey goes through several phases. When he finally gets friends they work together well, and the girls add some depth. I’m sure the prince will turn out not to be a total brat, but right now it feels like he needs a good spanking before all the goodwill. He’d make a terrible king, everyone knows it, and no one will say it to his face until the villain at the end. And given who’s saying it, I can’t imagine that will have much impact.
Overall I’d be interested to see where this goes next, as it looks like we’ve pushed past most of the more standard developments and are venturing into new territory. I rate this book Recommended.